I. Thesis statement: Most people use Internet because it is easy to shopping online, talking online, even reading online, but some people using special skills to steal others money and personal information by using Internet.
A. Intro Strategy: There’s no strategy in my introduction, so I need to work on that.
II. Topic sentence: the Internet is a crucial marketing and advertising tool for businesses.
A. People use email and online telephone more often. (Blank)
III. People spend many times on online social networking such as Facebook.
A. The creator and the statistic about facebook usage (Ellison, Steinfield and Lampe 2)
IV. We also can study online
A. My personal experience
V. Internet addiction
A. Examples
B. explanation
VI. Identity theft
A. Explanations
B. Examples
VII. Internet hackers
A. Explanations
B. Examples
VIII. Conclusion
A. Refer back to the introduction
B. State the thesis
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