.Actually my purpose stays the same. I’m going to talk about the two sides of the Internet usage. Those are the two main points of my paper. To specific, I came up with several points about each side, which are some people use internet to do business, to make money; or to make more friends online; students also can study online, they can find many books. I found out that many articles that about the Internet marketing, which means people are buying products online. But some other people, they use internet to get personal information illegally; they also can steal money online, and do many things to get advantages for themselves; some students play Internet game too much and they don’t want to study anymore. I read an article that said there are millions of people in the world lost their personal information in a single one day. I also read a paper that said a 19 years old kid obsessed Internet game and almost quit his collage. That’s why many parents hate Internet so much because their kids obsessed Internet too much.

I’ll focus on explain it is the problem about people who are using the internet, not the problem about internet itself. Different people can make huge difference by using internet. So internet is just a tool, it doesn’t have any problem. I’ll give some examples about what exactly different between two kind of people use the internet.

My thesis will be the Internet is like a double-edge sword, when you are using it, you may get hurt by someone else online.

Actually my purpose stays the same. I’m going to talk about the two sides of the Internet usage. Those are the two main points of my paper. To specific, I came up with several points about each side, which are some people use internet to do business, to make money; or to make more friends online; students also can study online, they can find many books. I found out that many articles that about the Internet marketing, which means people are buying products online. But some other people, they use internet to get personal information illegally; they also can steal money online, and do many things to get advantages for themselves; some students play Internet game too much and they don’t want to study anymore. I read an article that said there are millions of people in the world lost their personal information in a single one day. I also read a paper that said a 19 years old kid obsessed Internet game and almost quit his collage. That’s why many parents hate Internet so much because their kids obsessed Internet too much.

I’ll focus on explain it is the problem about people who are using the internet, not the problem about internet itself. Different people can make huge difference by using internet. So internet is just a tool, it doesn’t have any problem. I’ll give some examples about what exactly different between two kind of people use the internet.

My thesis will be the Internet is like a double-edge sword, when you are using it, you may get hurt by someone else online.